One thing I learned about you is that you are the only girl of four. Your family is similar to mine because we had big family reunions every summer when I was little. The best thing about your video is the pictures. They went very well with the words. The only suggestion I have is that some of the words went by to fast to read.
One thing I learned about you is you love the outdoors. Your family is similar/different than mine because you are a mother. Though a few things were different, I have a list too (basketball, track, baseball, cross country…) The best thing about your digital story is the way you changed the motion of each slide in the story. One think you could change is…just look at a slide or two where words overlap photos. They are a bit hard to read
One thing I learned about you is...you have three brothers. I only have one. Your family is similar/different than mine because...you have children that keep you busy with all their activities. The best thing about your digital story is…the variety of the pictures and the transitions. One think you could change is......have the music start as soon as the video starts.
One thing I learned about you is that you're the only girl in your family. Your family is different than mine because my family has never rode four wheelers. The best thing about your digital story is all the photos. One thing you could change is that choir is spelled wrong on one of the slides.
One thing I learned about you is that you're from Holly River. Your family is different than mine because I never didn't do sports. The best thing about your digital story is the great photos! You misspelled "choir" on one of your slides. Other than that though, don't change a thing!
One thing I learned about you is that your in a family full of boys! Your family is similar than mine because of your family reunions and active family life. The best thing about your digital story is definitely all the pictures! They add so much to your poem. One thing you could change is the music in the beginning of the video.
One thing I learned about you is you have cabin gatherings Your family is different than mine because you are full of boys. We have mostly girl usually just one boy. The best thing about your digital story is the pictures and background. One thing you could change is the music in the beginning of the video I would start it with the first slide.
One thing I learned about you is that you are the only girl of four. Your family is similar to mine because we had big family reunions every summer when I was little. The best thing about your video is the pictures. They went very well with the words. The only suggestion I have is that some of the words went by to fast to read.
ReplyDeleteKristina, Great job!
ReplyDeleteOne thing I learned about you is you love the outdoors.
Your family is similar/different than mine because you are a mother. Though a few things were different, I have a list too (basketball, track, baseball, cross country…)
The best thing about your digital story is the way you changed the motion of each slide in the story.
One think you could change is…just look at a slide or two where words overlap photos. They are a bit hard to read
One thing I learned about you is...you have three brothers. I only have one.
ReplyDeleteYour family is similar/different than mine because...you have children that keep you busy with all their activities.
The best thing about your digital story is…the variety of the pictures and the transitions.
One think you could change is......have the music start as soon as the video starts.
One thing I learned about you is that you're the only girl in your family. Your family is different than mine because my family has never rode four wheelers. The best thing about your digital story is all the photos. One thing you could change is that choir is spelled wrong on one of the slides.
ReplyDeleteOne thing I learned about you is that you're from Holly River.
ReplyDeleteYour family is different than mine because I never didn't do sports.
The best thing about your digital story is the great photos!
You misspelled "choir" on one of your slides. Other than that though, don't change a thing!
One thing I learned about you is that your in a family full of boys!
ReplyDeleteYour family is similar than mine because of your family reunions and active family life.
The best thing about your digital story is definitely all the pictures! They add so much to your poem.
One thing you could change is the music in the beginning of the video.
One thing I learned about you is you have cabin gatherings
ReplyDeleteYour family is different than mine because you are full of boys. We have mostly girl usually just one boy.
The best thing about your digital story is the pictures and background.
One thing you could change is the music in the beginning of the video I would start it with the first slide.